• First glance: What grabs attention first? Answer B – “Best AI notetaker”. Hints at value but still generic, doesn’t create tension.
• Tension check: Which part actually creates urgency? Answer C – Nothing really grabs attention. Copy is visible but not compelling.
• Best rewrite: Which line would earn attention fastest? Answer A – “Stop losing critical meeting info. This AI notetaker captures everything for you.” Names a real pain point, introduces friction, sparks curiosity.
• Why it works: Answer A – It names a real pain point. Attention is earned by showing a problem the reader actually cares about.
•Key insight: Experienced marketers map the gap between what the brand says and what the user feels. This is where visibility is won or lost.